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Fast food is becoming one part of life everywhere this has bad effects on our lifestyles and diet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years, there has been considerable debate over whether fast food has worse effects on health of society. While fast food requires less time than any other food to prepare, I firmly believe that this shift leads to obesity.

Proponents of the view of consuming fast food cite various reasons to support their stance, particularly fast preparation. When individuals don’t have enough time for preparation of food, it become really easy and comfortable to order or prepare fast food in short period of time, that leads to saving time. As a result individuals try to overcome problems with lack of time, thereby eating really tasty and delicious fast food. This is particularly beneficial for people who have tight schedule especially for civil servants. For instance big organisations order fast food instead of prepare it to save time to other works. Nevertheless, despite these arguments, I am really convinced that fast food causes obesity In many situations.

If consumption of fast food is incorrect or not the right one, it provides eating disorders which leads to obesity. As a result people become lazy due to obesity from fast food, thereby standing without motivation. In a world where obesity from junk foods is common, it is important to do some gym and workouts. For example according to recent researches in Uzbekistan showed that the rate of people who are suffering from junk food is really enormous comparing with the past. In conclusion, fast food can help in all aspects of live to people to have fast lunch during busy times but I believe that the main reason of obesity and other diseases is fast food, they can be really detrimental for people who have problem with digestive system.

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