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IELTS Task 1 Academic Essay

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The two maps illustrate changes that have taken place in the layout of the science park between 2008 years and the present today. In terms of overall changes, park shifted its focus towards self-development, technology and education, with the addition of research and developments, station areas, and increases in trees and road in this area.

Of particular note is cycle paths and railways was added nearby buildings. In 2008 year, the layout was relatively simple.

What could be seen on the right-hand side of map was offices and reception not far from the trees and grasslands. Below them was situated business units nearby the main road. In addition, in the southern side of areas featured car park surrounded by footpaths, with the IT Centre and Cyber security. At present, the layout became modernized. The university hub has been set up on the right side of the map, thereby replacing the former reception.

Apart from that, IT Centre has been replaced by innovation Centre adjustment to the trees. Despite these changes, business units, car park as well as office has been remained unchanged in its original form, while Cyber Security building has been expanded, furthermore research and development has been built to the northeast in a previously vacant area.

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The essay covers the main changes in the science park layout, but some details are unclear due to grammatical errors.

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