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IELTS Task 1 Academic Essay

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The two maps illustrate changes that took place in the layout of school between 1985 and the present today. In terms of overall changes, school shifted its focus towards education, self-development, and technology, with the addition of fitness Centre, swimming pool as well as learning resources Centre.

Of particular note is the removal of footpaths from the central part of the map to create more open space. In 1985, the layout was relatively simple.

What could be seen on the left-hand side of the map was library and office buildings, while car park and classroom had been near the central road. Moreover, car park had been on the top side of the map surrounded by footpaths, with entrance and exit to the north. In addition, a huge playing fields could be seen on the left-hand side of the classroom blocks. Furthermore, the population of school had been 1500 students. At present, the layout became modernized. The library has been replaced by a new buildings such as learning resources Centre and compute room and there is some buildings like classroom, swimming pool and fitness Centre that has been built in a previously vacant area. Apart from that, playing fields has been declined, while the school population has been increased from 1500 to 2300 students.

Despite these changes, car park, exit and entrance has been remained unchanged in its original form.

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