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IELTS Task 1 Academic Essay

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The two maps illustrate changes that took place in the layout of a bookstore between 2000 and the present time. In terms of overall changes, a bookstore shifted its focus towards self-development, education and technology, with the addition of new facilities such as art, hobbies, cookery and fiction.

Of particular note is the fiction building has changed to create more open space to the other rooms.

In 2000, the layout was relatively simple. What could be seen on the top right-hand side of the map were fiction areas, while some buildings like galleries, hobbies, arts, as well as travel buildings were situated on the central part of the map. Additionally service desk, non-fiction and new books rooms featured in the southern side of the map, with the entrance side was located on the northwest side of the map near the fiction area. At present, the layout became modernized.

Firstly, the fiction has replaced by a new non-fiction. Furthermore, new modern rooms like fictions, art, hobbies and cookeries have completely set up, thereby replacing large fiction area. In addition, rooms that located in the central side cleared to make room for some tobies, while non-fiction area converted into café. Despite these changes, some huge buildings like travel, service desk, new books and entrances have remained unchanged in their original form. Moreover

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