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IELTS Task 1 Academic Essay

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The chart illustrates the details about the field of favorite subjects of 60 students from a couple of schools, school A and B. Overall, what is clear from the bar chart is that science and sport are the most popular subjects in school A, while school B involves in social science language.

In terms of school A, just over half engage in sport, making it by far the most preferred subject among 36 students. Students of school A also study science and social as well as language.

Meanwhile drawing attracts around 4 of students in school A. Regarding school B, drawing sees the highest level of students at about 25, followed closely by language at approximately 18. Far fewer students study science and sport (at just over 2)and (around 5), respectively.

Lastly, social science attracts students with about 10 involvement.

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