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The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevante.

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Essay Response

154 words3 paragraphs

The given line graph shows information about how much money was spent on books in Germany, France, Italy, Austria, from 1995 to 2005, details are measured in currency. Overall, in the shown diagram, France, Italy and Austria rose together slowly while Germany grew significantly.

As the chart shows france and italy were growing up slowly while Austria grew up from 30 to 40 but in the period of 2001 Austria was growing up fastly while italy and france were growing up slowly to 2003 year end of the 2005 year austria together with france grew up to 70 dollars But Italy grew up to 60.

On the other hand Germany was growing up slowly from 80 to 90 between 95s to 99s and slowly and slowly dropped to middle between 80 and 90 but at the end of the 2005 year Germany increased between 90 and 100. In conclusion germany and austria grew up so quickly

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This essay achieved a band score of 6.5. Key strengths include Provides an overview of trends and Covers all countries mentioned in the task. Areas for improvement: Some data inaccuracies and Limited detailed comparisons.

Overall Band Score

6.5/ 9.0
3paragraphs
154words

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