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Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?

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Most of the pollution is result of irresponsibly done activities by humans, one of them is deforestation which is the root cause for damages to natural environment. In this essay, I will try to list some possible solutions to the problem.

One major problem deforestation leads to is poor air quality, which can be deadly dangerous in the long term. Trees play a big role in purifying the air from the carbon dioxide humans produce. For instance, according to statistics, Uzbekistan, where I live, is ranked number one in list of the poorest air quality country, this is because of excessive deforestation and other reasons. If we do not take this seriously, this can even affect negatively to neighbor countries.

To solve this problem, every one of us, whether the government or individuals, should take action on this seriously. Reforestation can be done by anyone easily, which is probably the most effective action we can take. For instance, there is a Youtuber called “Activist”, and he started a project to plant 1 million trees in Uzbekistan, and I believe, all of us can contribute it.

In conlusion, bad air quality became a problem mainly because of deforestion, and this can be reduced by reforestation which government and people must do.

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The essay addresses the task by proposing solutions to deforestation, but the solutions are not explored in depth.

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