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Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?

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Given this discussion, this controversial relevant topic plays a huge role in you life for few reasons. First, deciding of whether building narrow tall or wide and not so tall facilities can lead to unbalanced distribution of vital resources such as water and gas and so on.

Second, While some people think that it is better to create in tall buildings, I assume that it is better to build houses to live. Of course, it depends on the location itself. For example, tall buildings are suitable in the centre of cities. Similarly, in the peripheral areas, it is better to have a house. In doing so, the balance will exist and positively correlate with infrastructure.

First, when you are a online enterpreneur, you have to have a quiet room to have calls. So, if you live in tall buildings you can somitimes be distracted by neighboors that live near to you. In addition, sometimes you feel exhausted after hard work, so you can rest at house without any noises. Second, some tall buildings for living do not promote additional car parking areas, which can lead to car parking troubles. Then, it could cause objections of people. Thus, living in these areas are somehow intriguing. Third, many people, espessially in Central Asia, think that some people that live in tall buildings polute air: they thraw trashes anywhere they want, utilize non-recycling products, and smoke in the living apartment.

To conclude, If I had a choice, i would definitely choose living in houses!

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