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IELTS Task 1 Academic Essay

The two maps illustrate the transformation of Greenwich Park over a ten-year period from 2015 to 2025. In 2015, GreenwichPark was primarily a green space. Firstly the Northern and western were densely forested, the forested areas were occupied nearly half of the western parkland. Meanwhile a small ...

Task 1200 words
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These days more people put their personal information, such as names, addresses and telephone numbers, online for everyday activities such as socialising on social networks or banking purposes. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, the internet has become common thing in our lives, and people use it in different field, such as scrolling social media, online paying and studying. As a result, here they often share their private information: logins, passwords, g-mails, other important documents. Some say that there is n...

Task 2279 words
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The maps illustrate a bookstore since 2000 and until now

The maps illustrate a bookstore since 2000 and until now. Overall, what is clear from the maps that the bookstore has become more modernized. Although many new facilities have been added, the size of fiction and service desk sections have been noticeably reduced. To begin with, in 2000, the main en...

Task 1181 words
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IELTS Task 1 Academic Essay

The line graph compares the proportions of women employees aged between 15 and 63 in five different countries--Iceland, Canada, Germany, Chile, and Turkey—between 2003 and 2009, measured in percentages. Overall, Iceland recorded the biggest portion of female employees in required age limit, while Tu...

Task 1191 words
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IELTS Task 1 Academic Essay

The chart illustrates the details about the field of favorite subjects of 60 students from a couple of schools, school A and B. Overall, what is clear from the bar chart is that science and sport are the most popular subjects in school A, while school B involves in social science language. In terms...

Task 1140 words
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IELTS Task 1 Academic Essay

The line graph illustrates the production levels of the variety types of fuel, namely petroleum, coal, and natural gas in the UK from 1981 to 2000. Overall, the production levels in petroleum and natural gas increased while the figure for coal declined significantly. Notably, the petroleum consiste...

Task 1185 words
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IELTS Task 1 Academic Essay

The two maps illustrate changes that took place in the layout of a bookstore between 2000 and the present time. In terms of overall changes, a bookstore shifted its focus towards self-development, education and technology, with the addition of new facilities such as art, hobbies, cookery and fiction...

Task 1220 words
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IELTS Task 1 Academic Essay

The two maps illustrate changes that took place in the layout of school between 1985 and the present today. In terms of overall changes, school shifted its focus towards education, self-development, and technology, with the addition of fitness Centre, swimming pool as well as learning resources Cent...

Task 1228 words
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IELTS Task 1 Academic Essay

The two maps illustrate changes that have taken place in the layout of the science park between 2008 years and the present today. In terms of overall changes, park shifted its focus towards self-development, technology and education, with the addition of research and developments, station areas, and...

Task 1208 words
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The maps illustrate the changes on the area from 1995 to the present

The maps illustrate the changes on the area from 1995 to the present. In terms of overall changes, the map has shifted its focus towards new areas and new facilities, with the addition of tennis, car park, and expansion of residential areas. Of particular note is the removal of forest park to creat...

Task 1201 words