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Learning a language is becomming less common, as AI-powered tools are ameliorating in terms of translating. While AI provides us with handful of opportunities and ease our life, I believe that it cannot replace the role of deep human connection that language creates. AI helps people with many tasks ...
The provides line graph gives information on the changes in three different areas of crime in Manchester city centre from 2003 to 2012. Overall, the yellow line represents burglary crime which it falls sharply during the years, the yellow line shows car theft accidents and it rises slightly in this ...
The presented charts describe the main reasons for study of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers. Overall, the first chart show us that people want studying for career till fourty and they choose studying for own interest after fourty years. The second chart i...
Nowadays people use internet almost in an all possible ways and it helps do their job faster and better, however internet have some problems with securing personal information that outweighs advantages of it. I strongly agree that internet have many advantages and that we should not share our person...
The bar charts compare the average annual salaries of university graduates and the tuition fees they pay in 3 different universities in Law and Business, measured in thousands of dollars. Overall, tuition fees for Law in Universities B and C are the highest among all categories, whereas University A...
Some people think that competition at work, at school, and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other, on my point of view, you should cooperate more, perhaps, only with people with your same objectives that make you i...
Nowadays, people have constantly discussed if competing at work, at school, or in daily life situations is beneficial, or in contrast, communities should find alternate ways rather than challenging each other. On one hand, some individuals argue that competing with others in our daily basis is a goo...
Compete makes you achieve goals. Having competitions is something really important in your daily life, in work, in school, in everywhere you are. It's more effective competing with others than cooperate if you want to be someone in life. By competing, we start proposing goals to our mind, and daily...
Some people believe that competition in work, school, and everyday life is beneficial, while others argue that cooperation is more important. Both sides have valid points, and taking both of them into account may be the most effective. On the one hand, competition can be a strong source of motivatio...
The given line chart illustrates how many shops closed and opened in a certain nation from 2011 to 2018. Overall, the number of both shop openings and closures experienced upswings, and at the end of the period, the figure for closures was higher than that for openings. Regarding the first 3-year ...
It is argued by some that robots are significant in the coming development of humanity, while others claim that they bring danger and negative impact on the society. This essay will explore both ideas and explain why robots might become crucial for people's lives. On the one hand, with these modern...
Nowadays, some people believe that competition at work, at school, and in daily life is a positive thing, while others think that cooperation should be encouraged instead of competing against each other. On the one hand, competition is a common thing that even kids participating, and many people say...
The line graph illustrates information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Overall, the highest type of activity was film club and several participants participated, while amateur dramatics decreased over a...
The figure illustrates the process of how ethanol is produced which is a type of biofuel. Overall, The production of ethanol have three phases that contains harvesting, pre-processing and processing in a cyclic manner. At the initial stage, plants absorb sunlight and carbon-dioxide to produce energ...
The pie chart shows the moderate household expenses in a country between 1950 and 2010. Overall, there was a significant shift over a 60-year period. In 1950, the largest expenditures proportions fell on housing. By 2010, however, this was the only category whose proportions saw a dramatical fall. ...